I think these layouts work a lot better than the ones with the type on the inside and underneath. The title being by the body copy seems to sit a little better on the shirt and seems to work for me better on the eye. Aesthetically I think these work better and it works with the concept more. I think this because it is quite a formal subject and these are quite formal columns, almost like newspapers. The other one looks a little too modernist for my liking. I also think these sit better on the shirt compared to the large rectangular box. The chest is the focal point.
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